[ON Writing/SU]The Alliance of Persona User

@Raiko : Ok, nanti di masukin ^^

untung aja ga ke kutub lagi

Saya bisa mati kesurupan kalo ngliatin crita gila kyk gini terus =)0

moga2 aja kaga gila bneran

Busyed dah

kanji pnya pliharaan kambing? sudah kuduga, kanji... -dilempar kanji-

wee!! fficnya keren! chara saya jg ada ^ ^
pake inggris lagi ! wahahah lanjutin yah!!

Episode : The Savior
Chapter 3

Shirohira Dorm

Sakurai : Let’s call everyone to return to the dorm.
Tio : I’ll call them……

Tio call Rey and The Others but no Answer.

Tio : What? *Try calling again*
Reis : What’s up?
Tio : I don’t know it wa—
? : Hello there….
Reis : What!? This voice?! Spark!?
Spark : That's right! Your friend is in MY hand *evil laugh*
Reis : Return them at once Spark!! You’ll regret if you don’t do it!!
Spark : Your friends want to talk to you.
Raiko : Help us….. Please…..
Reis : Raiko!!
Spark : Wanna speak with other?
Mizu : I was….. captured…..
Sakurai : Mizu!!
Spark : And other *laugh*
Koe : Uuuugh…. They’re…. strong… so we’re captured…..
Karin : Koe!?
Spark : All your friend are with me, get to Maze Castle NOW if you want them return unharmed*evil laugh* *closed the communicator*
Tio : He turn it off.
Miu : What should we do Sakurai?
Sakurai : Okay, we’ll go there at once.
Reis : I know you’ll do that… Sakurai-san.
Sakurai : Alright, Let’s do it!!
All : Yeah!!
Reis: Hey Souji, Minato.
Souji ‘n Minato : Huh?
Reis : let’s go together ‘kay?
All : Yeah, we’re all persona User!!
Souji ‘n Minato : If you say so~~ *get near them and make a battle plan with everyone*

Meanwhile at another side of Shirohira Town

Zack : Heah*crash* hmph…. Too many….
? : heah! *clash* persona!! *blaam*
Zack : Whoa, new guys….?
?? : You okay?
? : yes, I’m alright…
?? : That’s good then.
? : Hey, Mikoto…. We going back now?
Mikoto : I don’t think so Dojima-san. They’re all get us now. *saw Shadow all over their place*
Dojima : Well. Do we have a choice?
Zack : Persona!! Maralagidyne!!! *All Shadow defeated*
Dojima : Huh!? *look at Zack* Who’re you?
Zack : I’m Zack Fair, Persona User too.
Mikoto : Another Persona User….
? : There they are.
?? : Heeey…
??? : Over here…
Mikoto : oh hey, Takaya, Chidori, Jin!!
Jin, Takaya, Chidori : We searching for you..
Dojima : What happened in Shirohira!? Why there’s too much Shadow here!?
Zack : Well.. The Balance of This World nearly destroyed. So there’s Shadow crawl over this World.
All : What!?
Jin : No way!! After Nyx and izanami come here, there’s another come!!
Zack : it was not an ordinary power….. it even get this world become a messing world…
Takaya : Hm…. We better get back to Shirohira Dorm right now…
? : Not so Fast…
Zack : Spark!?
Spark : I’m not alone Zack. Come Aragi!
Aragi : *silent*
Zack : Aragi!!
Aragi : *silent and attack Zack*
Zack : *dodge* Damn!? Aragi!!
Aragi : *Attacking Zack again*
Zack : *Dodge again* Tch…
Spark : Die you Zack!!
Zack : Wha-!?
Jin : persona!! *sukukaja to Mikoto*
Takaya : Persona!! *Mind Charge to Mikoto*
Chidori : Persona!! *Tarukaja to Mikoto*
Mikoto : Persona!! *Phante Rei*
Spark : What!? *dodge*
Aragi : Shadow!! *Die For me!!*
All : Aargh!! *weak attack*
Spark : It was…. Great Power…..*look at Aragi*
Aragi : *silent*
Spark : … Get him in The Castle…..
Aragi : *Silent*
Spark : Reis’s Friends will be my puppet. *evil laugh*

At Dorm

Sakurai : Alright, everything is set to go..
Yurrei : Wow, what a brilliant tactic was that!?
Yabuki : Yes, Senpai. Let’s do it now…
Sakurai : Alright. Everyone! Ready!?
All : Yees!!! We’re ready!!
Sakurai : Then let’s go!!

All The Persona User in Shirohira Town Go to Maze Castle. What will happen to Reis and The other? Now, it will be shown in Next Chapter^^

[TO BE CONTINUED]

KENAPA DIKIT BANGET YAH???? MAKSUDNYA DIALOG SAYA

LANJUT DEH!!!!

Gmn lagi? banyak yg RP jdi ya slanjutnya wkt battle. liat deh. bakal panjaaaaaang*ditabok krn ngomong kepanjangan*





Souji : Wooo, nih dorm koq kaya bangunan pencakar langit ya?
Minato : kaga tau.
Reis : nih bangunan yg bangun kumpulan kambing(?)
Minato : Kambing?
Reis : maksud wa org yg kpalanya kaya kambing.
Yurrei : Euw, ngeri....
Reis : becanda doank
Souji : trus yg bangun sapa?
Reis : Tuhan.....
All :
Reis : ntuh aq ngarang doank
Minato : yg btul mana!?
Reis :w a kaga tau, tanya ma Narator.
Souji : Woooooy Naratoooor~~*manggil narator*
Narator : *nulis mulut Souji di ikat pake kabel* diem lu, wa dah dsni dri tdi.
Souji : mmhmmhmmh......
Minato : dah lepasin dia deh Narator...
Narator : *nulis ngebebasin Souji* dah tuh.
Souji : Huuuaaaaaaaaah *kluar bau mulut yg baunya jengkol*
Yurrei : astaga!! Baunya*pingsan*
Minato : Eeeeeek~~*pingsan*
Reis : *pake masker* bused, pake masker tpi msh bau~~*pingsan*
Narator : *pingsan juga*
Souji : Wha-!? oi bangun!!

setelah beberapa menit mreka bangun.

Souji : Akhirnya sadar juga.
Kanji : Yo senpai!!
Reis : Uuugh *bangun* dasar. kluarin bau kaya gitu.
Narator ; dasar, wa band lo nanti
Kambing : mbeeeeeeeeek~*kentut baunya yg kluar kaya bom*
All : Bused!!*pingsan lgi*
Kanji : Lho? Senpai, Narator!!!
Banci : Oooh itu Kanji.
Kanji : Oooh, halo om!!
Banci : eikeh dah lama g liat kamu boo~~
Kanji : yok kita jalan2
Banci : Ok boo~~

Kanji dan Banci pun pergi, dan setelah itu.

Tingky Winky : ada org...
Lala : Diapain nih?
Poo : *ntet ntet(suara skuter Poo)* awas!! *nabrak Dipsy.
Dipsy : *mental kejalan ditabrak mobil*
Teletubbies : Eeeh, tunggu Dipsy!! *ketengah jalan juga ditabrak kreta*

Narator : Emmm...*bangun*
kambing : Mbeeeeeekkkk~~ *prut(ngebokerin ama ngentutin Narator)*
Narator : *pingsan lgi*

kalo gini mah sama aja, g bakal slesai FF nih

Oh noo!! Souji tnyata bau!!

Lanjut~~
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Episode : The Savior
Chapter 4
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In Front of Maze Castle.

Wkwkwk, Yabuki juga ada ya ? (Btw dia jadi lebih berani, ya ?) Thx ud masukin, it's an honor >w<

Btw Yabuki koq jd Analyzer y ? Dia kan Healer, wkwkwk *Ditabok bolak-balik, habis itu ditenggelemin di Segitiga Bermuda*

aq kira analyzer

Tpi nanti aq tambahin slain Analyzer jdi :

Analyzer, Battle, healer *Bused Maruk ni *

Ahh asiik ada sya.. *girang*
Ahh kren kren seru loh!!
Mau baca lanjutannya!!!!!!!

no~ tidak kusangka onichan bau mulut. Yang pertama kali pingsan saya lagi

Liat yg agak bawah

Prasaan char gw ga gitu2 amat *sweatdrop*

Lha trus gmn? wa kalo buat berdasarkan kalimat yg biasanya d RP qm omongin

Busyed dah O_O

Maka na liat lg post2 gw d RP =.="

dihp ga muncul episode yang ini. Yosh, disini Yurreinya udah bener^^

Souji : Nih rame2 mau pindah?
Minato : ga, mau kamping kali..
Reis : Ngawur, kita mau perang *siap AK 47 ama Bazooka, + pistol*
Yurrei : Weeee, perang?
Tio : kalo perang napa kita sama2?
Riou : Iya ya...
Hana : Go Go Go GO!!! perang di depan!!

Segerombol pasukan menyerbu Shirohira*ni yg buat Shirohira ancur *

Souji : Oh My Goshong
Minato : Aq siap!!*bawa Sniper magnum* *dor dor*......... kaga ada yg kena >3<
Yurrei : *ambil Machine Gun* Sini lo smua!! *DDDDDDDDDDRRRRRRRRRRRRTTTTTTTTTTT*
Comandan : Cover cover, don't get killed.
Yurrei : *ktawa kaya org gila* DRRRRRRRRRRRRTTTTTTTTT* bumi bergetar*
Comander : Get down!! WE need back up!! *emang perang(?)*

*Ciiiiuuuuung BLAM. DRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRTTT. (nglempar granat) BUUUUUM. DRRRRRRRRT*

Souji : Wets?! *liat granat ngarah ke Souji* Nih, kekuatan Baseball q!!*mukul granat pake pemukul golf* BLAAAAAAAAM...... *Gosong*
Sakurai : neh perang beneran!?
Hana : Kaga tau..
Yurrei : *masih nembakin pasukan pake machine Gun* SINI LO SMUA!!!!
All : *sweatdrop* ngeri....
Reis : Ikuuuut~~ *Pake M150 Bisa!!* Glek glek glek glek.... Hah... Yak pemirsa, ditangan saya ada M 150 BISA!! *ditembak pake shotgun*
Comander : Mooooove!!
Soldiers : Yeeeeeeeeeee!!!
Minato : *liat Souji gosong* ........... smoga amal baikmu ditrima di sono*nunjuk tong sampah*
Souji : pale lu Tong Sampah, wa masih idup *ditembak Sniper tepat XXX-nya*
Minato : Msh isa hidup?
Souji : kaga..... *pingsan*
Minato : *berdoa*
Reis : Mi... Na.... To.....
Minato : Nape lu Reis?
Reis : Tolong... doain gue ditrima di sisinya *nunjuk semut*
Minato : Amiiiin~~~
Reis : *Njitak Minato* Lo emang parah. masa wa mati seh? wa protagonist tau.
Minato : mene ketehek.. wa nuruti printah lo doank..
Reis : Ya udah deh, wa mau telepon AU-KK
Minato : Apaan tuh AU-KK?
Reis : Angkatan Udara Kandang Kambing.
Minato : Emang sapa yg punya?
Kanji : Aq yg punya AU-KK, masalah amunisi dah siap smua
Reis : Siiip~~ Ok Kirim!!

Segerombol Kambing terbang, pergi ke Shirohira

Kambing2 : Mbeeeeeeeeeeek~~
kanji : Ok turunin skarang tepat ke koordinat 1972x1204
Kambing2 : Mbeeeeeeeeeeeek~~*kluarin hujan boker*
Reis : Smuanya berlindung!!!!!
All : WTF!? *berlindung dibawah mobil.
Comander : Pull back at once!!
Kanji : Ke koordinat 2021x1572 lgi!!
kambing2 : Mbeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek~~ *kluarin hujan Boker lgi*
Comander : nooooooooooooo~~

Setelah serangan dari AU-KK.

Reis : Akhirnya selesai perangnya....
All : Whoooa~~ bau~~
Souji : *kehujanan Boker*
Minato : Akhirnya perang selesai

[THE END] *ditabok*

Bkn tamat masalah FF tp tamat masalah PERANG!!

Gila! Yurrei sadis!

pendapat pertama :

-gw sadis amad ya disana
-yang kedua si Minato diterima di tong sampah si reis diterima di sisi semut
-yang lainnya ga tau lagi deh kebanyakan ketawa

Kereeen~~ W juga mau mukul granat pake Bat~!
Wahaaha, Yurrei-senpai sadis~~ *digbukin Yurrei-senpai*

saya lagi makan,
lanjut