[ON Writing/SU]The Alliance of Persona User

yay ! watashi akhirnya muncul juga ! tapi di alliance mana ya ? *thinking* thx senpai !

Di alliance yang mana maunya?

Evil Alliance apa Light Alliance?

Ea gw agak bingung di bagian ini


UDAH LANJUT AJA BIAR GW GA BINGUNG!!!

P.S. : Masih ngambek dia padahal dia yg ngasih comment

4 Elemental Generals? And... The battle song... Oh wow... Tales of The Abyss huh? => inget Tales of The Abyss.

Quote :

Spark : Tch!! *ready his Sword*

It'll be nice if you use the words: prepare his sword. Not ready his sword. => correction again~~

please, masukin light alliance, ya ? pasti suatu saat reis dkk butuh bantuan watashi *ditebas reis coz ge-er*
u-um....aigis jrg muncul di FF senpai y ?

@Yurrei : Britau watashi knp dia ngambek

@NG : OK Thanks for the correction

@Kira : OK

Your welcome...~ Watch for your grammar and vocab for the right words to use.

Well... Thats all... Keep up the good work for your fanfic ^^V
I want to see the next chapter >w<

OK, i`ll see u again senpai ! thx so much ! *dibunuh+ditebas+dilindes+ditendang+ditembak+dibuang kelaut...*

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Episode: The Truth
Chapter: Elemental Battle
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A new guy, Itsuki appeared before Seta and Minato and they fight each other. After that, Spark came to Tsukioka Town and met up with Reis. There, Blizzard, Blaze and someone that called Aero, show up and decide to fight Reis and Spark.

Blizzard : You both will die...
Blaze : So get ready....
Aero : .........
Spark : Get ready Reis.... They're stronger than me....
Karin : If so then let me join in....
Reis : Huh!? Karin!?
Karin : Don't worry about me.... Neo is take a rest right now....
Reis : What are you doing here then?
Karin : I know something might happen, so I'm following you....
Reis : *sweatdrop* Why following a guy like me? Ah.... Whatever....
Wataru : Wait just a moment there!! *running*
Reis : W-Wataru?
Wataru : I'm Wataru.... Will fight you again!! Blizzard!
Blizzard : That guy eh? Alright then.... *Attack Wataru*
Spark : I'll help Wataru.... *run to Wataru*
Karin : I'll fight that guy over there.... *look at Blaze*
Blaze : Fighting me? Alone? *laugh*
Neo : She won't fighting alone.... *walk to Karin* I'll fight with her....
Karin : N-Neo...
Blaze : Get ready then.... *Attack Neo and Karin*
Aero : So.... I'm with Reis now....
Reis : Hmph.... *summon Moonlight Scythe*
Aero : Get ready weakling.... *attack Reis*
Reis : Come and get it!!

Battle Start!!
Music : Battle MUsic

Aero : He weak against wind, so it'll be just a breeze....
Yurrei : Good Luck Reis.....
Reis : Thanks.... Clevarion, Maziodyne!!
Aero : *evade all ziodyne easily* Dark Tempest!! *A Black tornado appeared before Reis eyes*
Reis : Dammit!! Light aura, Dark aura.... Eternity Aura!! *BLAAAAAR* Clevarion, Justice Rush!!
[Justice Rush and Dark Tempest explode at the center of the battle]
Reis : Again!! Clevarion, Maziodyne!!
Aero : You never give up huh? *cast a wind Barrier and all Maziodyne get absorbed*
Reis : Damn....
Aero : My turn.... *wind getting stronger near him* Infinite Gust Wind!! *A gust of wind like Tornado appeared*
Reis : Cleavarion!! Thunder Reign!! *The Thunder Reign damaged Reis's Scythe* Thunder Cross!!
[Thunder Cross getting swept away then The Gust Wind damaged Reis]
Reis : GAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! *pushed back and crashed at Cave wall and knock down* S-Sh*t.... *try to get up*
Aero : Persona.... Phante Rhei....
Reis : What!? *weak damaged* GAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! *daze*
Aero : Dark Tempest.... *Black Tornado appeared again*
Reis : *damaged again* GAAAAAAAAAH!!! ====> HP : 127
Aero : Just that? =====> HP : ????
Reis : I.... I'm done yet.... *get up* I.... won't be defeated.... *smile while trying hard to get up*
Aero : Is that so? Then die.... *A full power of wind gather up into his hand*
Reis : Lightning Aura!! *BRZZZZZZZZZT* Clevarion, Thunder Reign!! *Thunder Reign damaged Reis's Scythe again*
Aero : Good bye.... Reis Yamatono....
Reis : Hmph....
Aero : Wind Storm!! *A big Tornado appeared from in front of Aero*
Reis : Infinite Thunder!! *A big Thunder appeared from the sky then destroy The Tornado*
Aero : Not bad.... *look at Reis coldly*
Reis : *pant pant pant pant pant*
Aero : *evil smile*

[Neo and Karin side]

Blaze : Flame Tounge!! *A flame from the ground appeared and attack Neo and karin*
Neo : Hyoumen!! Absolute Zero!! *The Flame Tongue frozen solid*
Karin : Heaaah!! Aprodite!! Niffleheim!!
Blaze : Flame Thrower!! *A flame appeared from his hand then melt The Niffleheim*
Neo : Hyoumen!! Vaero!! Thunder Icy Storm!! *Thunder Reign and Icy Storm formed together*
Blaze : Sol Blaster!! *A beam of Fire destroy The Storm made by Neo* My Turn!! Giga Flame!! *A Greater and Bigger Flame Thrower*
Neo : Ice Shield!!
Karin : Aprodite!! Makarakarn!!
[The Flame lifted]
Blaze : Again.... *jump* Infinite Flame Punch!! *Thousand Flame Punch damaged Neo and Karin*
Neo and Karin : GAAAAAAAAAAH!!! *pushed back*
Blaze : Again!! Firestorm!! *A storm of Fire appeared from Blaze's back* And.... Raging Fire!! *A greater Ragnarok appeared from Neo and Karin's ground*
Neo : Dammit!! *knock Karin down and taken all damage done by Blaze* GAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
Hyoumen : Neo!!!
Neo : I'm.... Okay....
Karin : N-Neo!!
Neo : *pant pant pant pant pant*
Blaze : *evil smile* Die you two....
Karin : Ungh!!
Neo : *pant pant pant*

[Spark and Wataru Side]

Blizzard : Infinite Ice Ridge!! *Stalagtit and Stalagmit made from Ice attack Spark and Wataru*
Wataru : Kiva!! Maragidyne!! *All The Ice getting melt*
Spark : Maziodyne!!
Blizzard : *evade all Ziodyne*
Wataru : Kiva, Maragidyne!!
Blizzard : *evade all Agidyne* What a weaklings.... *summon a Gigantic Ice and Throw it to them*
Spark : Dammit!! Maziodyne!! *No Effect*
Wataru : Kiva, Maragidyne!! *No Effect* What The-!?
Blizzard : Icy Storm!! *An Icy Storm appeared and damaged Spark and Wataru*
Spark and Wataru : GAAAAAAAAAH!!! *damaged again by Gigantic Ice and knock down*
Spark : D-Damn!!
Wataru : No.... Match....

Battle Over....
Music stopped....

Blizzard : Weak....
Blaze : I think you're stronger than we thought....
Aero : So that we can play with you.... But seems like you all are weak....
Reis : Guh!!*stand up*
Neo : *pant pant pant pant*
Karin : Uuugh....
Wataru : *hosh hosh hosh hosh*
Spark : They're strong.... I'm no match of them.... *unconscious*
Aero : chances! *take Spark and disappeared*
Reis : Spark!! *look at Aero take Spark*
Blizzard : Spark is in our hands now....
Blaze : Our mission is done....
Neo : No.... Wait....
[Blizzard and Blaze disappeared]
Wataru : What.... Happened....
Reis : Spark.... Is gone....
Neo : We're no match....
All : ............
Itsuki : HEY!!! Reis!! Neo!! Karin!! Wataru!!
Wataru : Itsuki?
Itsuki : What happened with you guys? You all are beat up....
Reis : We will talk later at Dorm.... Let's go....
Itsuki : Okay.... Oh yeah.... The two guys called Minato and Seta, they're all get back to dorm first....
Reis : Okay then.... Let's go....

After that, Reis and companions get back to The Dorm.
What will happen with Spark?
See the next Chapter~~

[TO BE CONTINUED]

Gundam Seed Destiny Sountrack... => entah knp jd nahan ktawa

Quote :

Karin : Apredite!! Makarakarn!!

*sweatdrop*

W-well... No comment... And... Good work...

Nahan ktawa?

Emang ada yang aneh?

Don't ask me...

Anyway.. Fix this one:

Quote :

Karin : Apredite!! Makarakarn!!

Its Aprodite...

Whew, OST Gundam masuk jug toh ?! hahahaha, jadi kangen nih.... *di-full blast ama S.F.* ngomong diomong..singkat amat ya ? *diinjek2 coz protes aja bisanya*

kog ini FF jadi mirip terbengkalai ? *ditimpukin* mana lanjutannya, senpai ?

Kenapa napa persona gw selalu salah di smua ff sungguh tragis nasibmu...karin....wkwkwkwkw!!!Gak papa kuq,tapi gw baru sadar....dulu prasaan nama Persona gw tetep Sakura deh..lah koq langsung berevolusi jadi aphrodite ya???mistery~~~~


hweheheheh gak papa kuq!!!lanjutanya mana reis??? gw dah kepanasan nunggu nih!!!ato jangan-jangan.....FILE NIH FF IKUT KEFORMAT???

Wow, kita bukanlah tandingan mereka?


Weleh, gue gak terima nih!


Lanjutin yah! Ok?

*kehilangan Lanjutan yang seharusnya buanyaaaaaaaaaaaaak!!**ditimpuk*
Tapi untungnya dah selesai

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Episode: The Truth
Chapter: Awakening of Reis and The Death Dragon's Prophecy
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Sanzobaraku Hill [Night Time]

Reis : *sigh*
Rovan : Don't be so down you damn Reis....
Reis : I'm weak.... I even can't save Spark....
Neo : No Reis.... They're tough.... So we barely can win against them....
Reis : That mean I'm a weakling.... *sigh*
Karin : Reis.....
Yurrei : Hey Reis!! Don't think like that!! You're not a weakling!!
Reis : ................. *sigh*
Kouyou : Hey Reis.... I hate at how you're now.... *come from the sky*
All except Reis : Kou!!
Kouyou : You stupid Reis.... *punched Reis*
Reis : Guh!!
Karin : Kou!!! What're you doing!!
Neo : Don't worry Karin....
Karin : But.....
Neo : Don't worry.... Just leave them be
Reis : Ugh...... *get up*
Kouyou : Reis.... I hate you when you're like this.....
Reis : ............ Just kill me......
Kouyou : Tch..... YOU BASTARD!!!!!!! *kick Reis*
Reis : *kicked by Kouyou* Ugh!!
Kouyou : Reis..... I'll wake you up Dammit!!

[An explosive explode in the middle of The City]

Rovan : WHAT THE HELL IS THAT EXPLOSION!!!
Neo : It's come from The City!!
Karin : Let's go!! *look at Reis* But....
Kouyou : Tch!! *run to the city*
Rovan : Hey wait up Kou!!! *after Kouyou*
All except Reis and karin : Wait for us!!! *after Kou and Rovan*
Reis : .....................
Karin : .....................

At The Middle of The City.

Boy 1 : SHIT!! What's with this Dragon!!
Dragon : GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! *Fire breath*
Boys : AAAAAAAAGH!!!
? : Fire Shield!! *Defend The Boys* Run away!!!
Boy 2 : O-Okay!!
Boys : *run away*
? : It's you..... And I now.... *ready his Sword*
Dragon : GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAWR!!!!

Battle Start!!

? : Persona.... Surt!! Ragnarok!!
Dragon : *Absorb* GRAAAAAAAA!! *Fire Breath*
? : *Absorb* Tch!! *jump* Norn!! Phante Rhei!!
Dragon : *damaged and weak attack* GRRRRRRRR!!!
? : Good.... *Slash The Dragon into 2*
Dragon : *sliced then disappeared*
? : Hmph.....

Battle Over....

? : The Dragon is not just this.... *look at the sky then Hundreds of Dragons fly over* Tch..... I have to defeat them.... *jump to the high building*

[Meanwhile, Kouyou and The Other]

Kouyou : Seal Gun!! *bang bang bang bang bang bang*
Dragon 1 : GRAAAAAAAAAA!!! *disappeared*
Dragon 2 : GRAAAAAAAA *fire Breath*
Kouyou : Tch!! Equin!! Makarakarn!! *The Breath repelled*
Dragon 2 : *damaged then disappeared*
Kouyou : Tch!!
Rovan : Hey Kou!! What the hell happened dammit!?
Kouyou : It's The Balance of This World!! It's going to be break!!
Rovan : WHA-!?
Dragon 3 : *Fire Breath*
Rovan : TCH!!! *attack the flame and slice The Dragon into 2*
Dragon 3 : *damaged and disappeared*
Al : They're all too much!!
Neo : Damn!! We can't defeat all of them!!
Hana : What should we do!?
Kouyou : Don't give up everyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Let's FIGHT!!!!!!!! *run to The Dragons*
Rovan : You said it Kou *follow Kouyou*
Hana : Wait!!
Wataru : *attacking 10 Dragons at once then run away because no match for 10 Dragons* HEEEEEEEEEELP!!!!!!!!
All : *sweatdrop*
Wataru : Kiva!! Megidolaon!! *All Dragons disappeared*
All : *double sweatdrop*
Wataru : I-I win....
All : *triple sweatdrop*

Sanzobaraku Hill

Reis : ....................
Karin : ........ Hey Reis..........
Reis : What's up.......?
Karin : You okay?
Reis : .... I'm fine.....
Karin : That's good *smile*
Reis : ............................
Karin : *look at everyone fighting* You know Reis......
Reis : Huh?
Karin : You're not weak.... *smile while looking at everyone fighting*
Reis : No.... I'm a weakling....
Karin : No Reis.... *look at Reis*
Reis : ......................
Karin : Hear this.... [Music]

Kazesasou kokage ni utsubusete naiteru
Mi mo shiranu watashi wo watashi ga miteita
Yuku hito no shirabe wo kanaderu GITAARA
Konu hito no nageki ni hoshi ha ochite

Reis : Huh!?

Yukanaide, donna ni sakende mo
ORENJI no hanabira shizuka ni yureru dake
Yawarakana hitai ni nokosareta
Te no hira no kioku haruka
Tokoshie no sayonara tsuma hiku *smile at everyone that fighting*

Reis : Karin....

At Middle of The City

Kouyou : Equin!! Maralagidyne!! *21 Dragons defeated*
Rovan : Azazel!! Maziodyne!! *17 Dragons defeated*
Wataru : Kiva!!! Maralagidyne!! *17 Dragons defeated*
Yuki : They're come again!!
Hana : Tch!!
Al : They keep coming!!
Neo : Don't give up!!!
All : *nod*
Neo : Show them who we are!!
All : YEAH!!!!!!

Sanzobaraku Hill

Karin :


Yasashii te ni sugaru kodomo no kokoro wo
Moesakaru kuruma ha furiharai susumu
Yuku hito no nageki wo kanadete GITAARA
Mune no ito hageshiku kakinarashite

Aa kanashimi ni somaranai shirosa de
ORENJI no hanabira yureteta natsu no kage ni
Yawarakana hitai wo nakushite mo
Akaku someta suna haruka koete yuku
Sayonara no RIZUMU

Reis : ......... *look at his hand* I......

Karin :

Omoide wo yakitsukushite susumu daichi ni
Natsukashiku me fuite yuku mono ga aru no

Join up with everyone Reis.... *smile at Reis*

Reis : Yeah.... *get up* I will.... Protect The World Balance!! run to the middle of The City*
Karin : Reis..... *smile*

Tsukioka City

Reis : *jump from the building to building* Clevarion!! Maziodyne!! *102 Dragons defeated*
Kouyou : Huh?
Reis : Clevarion!! Maziodyne!! *98 Dragons defeated*
Rovan : Reis is back huh?
Reis : I will fight back!! My Mission is to save The World!!! Clevarion!!!!!!!!!! Maziodyne!!!!!!! *217 Dragons defeated*
Wataru : Reis is so insane!!!
Reis : Clevarion!! Justice Rush!! *221 Dragons defeated*
Hana : Too strong....
Reis : Clevarion!! Maziodyne!! *100 Dragons defeated*
Yuki : He defeat those Dragons all alone...
Reis : Clevarion!! Maziodyne!! *98 Dragons defeated*

Karin :

Akatsuki no kuruma wo miokutte
ORENJI no hanabira yureteru ima mo dokoka
Itsuka mita yasurakana yoake wo
Mou ichido te ni suru made
Kesanaide tomoshibi
Kuruma ha mawaru yo

Reis : My Last turn....
? : What is this power!? Reis Yamatono!?
Reis : Clevarion!! Maziodyne!! *Thousand of Ziodyne defeated all Dragons*

Karin : Reis..... *smile*

[After everything all over, Reis get back to everyone]

Reis : [i]Thank you.... Karin.... You wake me up.... And thank you.... Everyone.....[i]

From far away

? : Reis Yamatono.... He is the one.......... So The Death Dragon Prophecy is The Truth eh? *chuckle* This will be fun.... *chuckle*

What was "?" Is?
And what he is for?
Better see the next episode XP

[TO BE CONTINUED]

Gw keren juga ternyata

Sayang suara gw gak semerdu itu

@ Naoto_Fans : hehe, kereeen! Aku juga gak mau kalah nih!



Tumben Karin bisa nyanyi. Kalo gitu tolong bikinin theme saya dong! Judulnya "Destiny's Play" dari Tetra Fang. *diinjak karena maksa*



Lanjuuut!

saya memnag bisa nyanyi sih

Eh oi...gw ninggalin si Neo whahahahahahah,kasian gw tinggalin!!lupa ngmng



LANJUT!!!!

Iya nih. Aku kelihatan keren pas manggilin Kiva


All units, don't give up!

bwuuhh... keyeen~ btw... dah brp episode neh? kuma.

@Kuma : Dah episode..... *ngitung* 10++ kalo ga salah *ditendang karna kebanyakan*

Quote :

Kouyou : Seal Gun!! *dor dor dor dor dor*

Er... Well... *sweatdrop* if you use english then its 'Bang' not 'Dor' please... *sweatdrop*

*see the song title*

A-AKATSUKI NO KURUMA?! O_O
Its 1 of my fav songs...!

Ahem... Back to topic... *digetok*
My character... *sweatdrop* whatever...
I want to see the next chapter...

Thanks Rik

*langsung ngedit*