Fanfic. Persona: The Repeated Tragedy

hmm....
ini adalah fanficku..
udah ad 2 chapter si....
yg mau liat ad di fanfiction.net
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4892029/1/the_repeated_tragedy

cerita secaara garis besar:
saat elizabeth berusaha membebaskan minato dari seal, sesuatu mengganggu prosenya yg menyebabkan Minato bebas dan sealnya terusak. NYXpun terbebas dan sekali lagi, Minato harus berusaha mencegah dunia dari kehancuran... bersama dengan teman temannya yg lain. P3 X P4 fanfic!!

maaf kl chp1 jelek bgt. baru pertama kali bikin fanfic. (dalam inggris lagi)
oh, satu hal lagi, mending bikinnya pake bhs Indo ato Inggris??

pake b indo lah...

omg2, di sini tuh yg bukan fanfic g apa kan?

cerita ori jg gpp kan?

oke , ntar saya bikin versi indonya. XD
hmm... kayanya gpp...
kurang tau juga deh....
memang ceritanya shidou - senpai ttg ap??

hmm utk awl2 komentar saya...
keanya lebih bgs pke bhs indo dehh
soalnya saya lg g mood baca bhs ing

tp critanya mnrut yukio bgus kok ^^
udh ok mnrut yukio X3

bagus kok... ntar jangan2 yg disebut temen2 barunya si Arisato tuh Seta dkk yah?

saya udah baca lho senpai! keren banget! saya salut soalnya saya kagak pinter pakai bahasa inggris! lanjut lagi ya!

It yg persona user lain mksdny dari p4 yaw??
Bgs amad critany...Bhs ing lg...Lanjut yaw ^^

@tio

bkn ttg persona, c...

bkn panpik yg jls...

@tio

fanficnya bagus!!!...tapi...terserah si kalau mau pake b.indo / b.inggris (tapi aku suka liat pke b.inggris, supaya ngelatih kemampuan inggrisku doang...)



Elizabethnya aku suka disini...

@minato

kayaknya ngak apa-apa cerita orisinil... mau lebih aman coba aja di www.fictionpress.com

@ Semua: Thx atas masukan!! Pada bilang bagus jd seneng.

Pasti akan ku terusin kalo begitu!! ditunggu ya!!!

Chapter 3
The other guest

While in the other place….
Yasoinaba, Samegawa floodplain…

Soji and Yosuke were sitting by the river bank, resting after finishing their first day in the 3rd year of Yasogami High.

“ Man, I don’t know If I can survive through this year. This first day is already killin’ me..” Said Yosuke, sighing.
“ Well… At least you’re not the only one who experienced it Yosuke,I felt it too. At least, it’s good to see that we are in the same class.” Said Soji, trying to cheer up Yosuke.
“ Yeah. It’s really good to see you again partner. I’m really surprised when you called and told me that you’ll be staying here again.” He laughed as he said that
“ You may thank my parents as they must go abroad again to work without infoming me when I arrived at my house. Because of that I only stay with them for only a few days, and then, they send me back here.”
“ Okay I’ll thank them later, coz with you here, this place won’t be much boring.Well you know, we have nothing much to do since midnight channel has gone. Everything have been quiet and peaceful.”
“ well, It’s good then. That’s mean nothing bad is going to happen. We can focus on living our normal life.”
“ Yeah, I know that. But, just still I miss that thrilling sensation when we fought together in that channel to save the world. Now, I’m really bored. Bored, BORED! AHH!!! I NEED SOMETHING THAT CAN ERASE MY BOREDOOM!!!” Yosuke screamed , almost making Soji deaf. But the boy remained cool and tried to suggest the brunette something.
“ well, maybe we can….” Just as He was about to finished his words, Yosuke stood up and screamed again. This time his voice dragged everyone attention at the floodplain
“ AH YES!! I KNOW!! How about If we go and do ‘operation babe hunt’?”
“ Sorry man, Not Interested. And, can you keep your voice low? you’re dragging people attention and it also makes you and me look bad here. ”
“ Oh, sorry for that..” Yosuke sighed, “Why not? Oh, yeah. I forgot that you have already have someone, right~?”
“ He..Hey, What are you talking about?”

‘Don’t tell me he…..’ Souji thought in his mind, he started to panic

“ Don’t pretend not knowing anything partner. You are dating yukiko aren’t you?”
“ Me? How do you kno.. I mean, W…why do you think like that ?!”

‘Damn,how did he know it……? ‘ again, he became more panicked, currently he was thinking of a way to make Yousuke stop talking abut this….

“ Why? How can’t I think like that If I often see you together with her in the shrine, walking home from school, on the rooftop during school break, eating lunch together. Oh yeah, I also can’t forget when I saw you with her at this place at night on the last day before you leave us.”

“ I thought there was no one there.. Urgh..What should I do? I promised her to tell this as a secret between us… C’mon soji! Think!Think!”

Yosuke kept storming Soji with all of his words about him and yukiko, while soji, was thinking a way to make Yosuke shut up and make him stop thinking that he and yukiko are dating. After \thinking of many other way, he couldn’t find any way to stop it and he had already cornered by all that Yosuke said. He couldn’t run anymore….

“ okay, okay, you won Yosuke, Me and Yukiko are dating.” Soji sighed
“ At last! You said it!! Yes!! Hahaha! Now, have you met her soji?” Yosuke asked him curiously
“ MMmm.. actually….. no… I haven’t. I didn’t see her either at school”
“ What!? How come you haven’t met her?! Then, come on! Let’s go and meet her!”
“ W…WAIT! Right now? Are you kidding me!?”
“ Well, of course not! C’mon let’s go to the inn!” Yosuke pulled soji’s hand so soji would stand up.
“ he…hey, I said wait” Just a he struggled with yosuke, a voice called him

“come…” the voice said
“ hm..? what? ” Soji stopped struggling and the at last, he stood up
“ hey, what’s wrong?” Yosuke also stopped pulling his hand.
“ have… you.. just said, ‘come’?” Soji asked yosuke
“ nope, I didn’t… why?”
“ It’s just, I feel someone called me..”

The voice soon called on him again

“come, there is no time to explain…”
“ The voice… who are you?” Soji tried to ask the voice with his mind
“ just come here, and you’ll know soon”
As the voice talked, Soji realized that he was very familiar with it. The voice that guided him through his journey…..
“ So, how I can get to your place ?“ Soji asked the voice again
“I’ll take you. Even though I will hurt you a bit. Just stand still..”
“ er.. soji, are you okay? You look weird… Hey, Soji!” Yosuke waved his hand infront soji, but Soji made no respond as he was talking with the voice. Suddenly , Soji grabbed his head as he was in pain, “ Urghh… Can’t you summon me there in a more better way.. it’s hurt.. you kn..o…w.” suddenly, Soji collapsed. Leaving Yosuke in panic…

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The velvet room…
Soji found himself in here and found something different, other than the place, there was already somebody else sitting on his usual seat.
“ Ah.. it seems our other guest have arrived, welcome again here..” Igor welcomed him
“ Hello Igor, Can’t you summon me in a better way??! And I like the old room better” Said Soji
“ Ah.. I’m sorry for that we can only summon you here when you’re unconscious or asleep.”
“ Then, can’t you wait until I sleep?”
“ I’m sorry, but this is an urgent call. First let me introduce you with our other guest, Minato, this is Soji, the other guest that I have told you before.”

Minato stood up from his chairand shook his hand with soji,” I see, so you’re Igor’s guest too. Nice to meet you. The name’s Minato”
“Hi, my name is Soji, it’s nice to meet you too. I think there’s something wrong that Igor called two of his guest at the same time, isn’t it”
“ Indeed, and now…” Minato turned to Igor again,” As he had arrived here, can you tell us your prophecy about the outcoming event ?”
“ Of course my dear boy. First let me show you the tarot card that came out as the result”

Igor waved his hand, and then, 13 tarot cards appear and then everthing is flipped up.
“ Do you look at that? Every Arcana is reversed except for the ‘fool’, and the ‘death’. Do you know what this mean?”
“ I don’t get it at all, I’ve just arrived here.. Can you explain it more slowly Igor?” Soji was confused and his face was puzzled
“ Soji, do you know about the rumour about ‘the end of the world’?” Minato asked soji without looking at him and kept thinking about the meaning of Igor’s Prophecy.
“ Yes I did, and it was a lie wasn’t it? Nothing happened at all.”
Minato stayed silence for a few seconds, than spoke again
“ Yes, nothing happened, because somebody had stopped it from becoming a reality, but now, it come back. The end is about to come Soji.”
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The end of chapter 3, Minato had met Soji, Now, what does the tarot cards that Igor showed mean? Just Wait! Hope you like this! Review plis~! XD

Oh yeah, btw, I currently tried to draw the cover for this fanfic.
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keren! keren! saya speechless sama kehebatan kamu dalam grammar dan lain-lainnya! kereeeeen!! ini di post nggak di ff.net? nanti saya review di sana.

mau di bikin covernya..? hebat!

haha, thx ya lalalala-san
tapi gak tau bisa bagus ato ngggak, berhubung gambar gw gak bagus -_-
dipost kok disitu. ^ ^

kan yg penting niatnya, bukan bagus atau nggaknya, wehehe

(sok tahu banget saya ini :p)

ditunggu next chap nya ya!

hahahahaha... gimana tuh jadinya tum de dum.....!!!!!!

keren abis!!!!!!!!!!! Lanjutin yah....

HYA!!!THX!!! pasti dilanjutin kok, cuma lagi aga ngadet aj idenya. haha

bagus2... bhs inggrisnya juga bagus! hebat2!

Chapter 4

Other Guest,Other Quest Pt.1



Soji couldn't believe what the blue haired boy had just said, the end was about to come. He thought after Izanami was gone, everything will be back to it's used to be.



" you're kidding, right." said soji in disbelieve

"No, this is serious. Coz I'm the one who supposed to seal Nyx. " Replied Minato as he turned to look at Soji and noticed that he was higher than him.

"Nyx? what is that? And, How can You become the seal?"

" Soji, do you remember about what Igor said that guest that enter the velvet room and its resident, will have a journey to find their answer to live. "



Soji remember that thing, it also brought back the memories of the past where he defeated Izanami, yes.. he remembered the purpose of his live.. the truth, he must find the truth from that thick fog..



" Yes, I do remember..." Said Soji

" Then, it's my purpose of life, to prevent the humanity from destruction, by sealing Nyx, and I'll explain what is Nyx later, coz now, we have something more important to do." Minato turne to Igor and Looked again at the tarot card. " Igor, I still don't understand about this a single bit."



Igor chuckled, " Don't this view is familiar to both of you?"

Both of them tried to recall their memories and come to the same thing..

" Social link." Said both of them in unison

" Yes, that's right, If you look at this, all of this card represent your friends, the fool represents you and the death represent Nyx, and it's minion. The Reversed social link.. Hmm.. Interesting, this journey maybe shorter than the last one, but much more difficult. Minato, as I said, your friend play an important role in here and it seems the role here will determine whether you will be able to find your way or your path is closed."

" Igor, why do you always love to play with riddle? don;t you know you only make us confuse?" Said Minato, he was getting more and more curious.

" We only give you assistance, and we will not help you in finding your direction in your adventure or revealing your main destination in your journey.You must find it by yourself." answered Igor

"Alright, fine, Igor when can I start ?" asked Minato
" As soon as you want my dear boy.." Said Igor
" And, how can I meet him again?" Said Minato pointing to Soji
" As soon as possible, don't worry, fate will lead you the same path Soon."
" Alright, then I'm off Igor, and Soji, Until we meet again, farewell."
Minato walked towards the boy and opened it, in a second, he had disappeared from here.
" Okay, I think I will leave too Igor." Said Soji
" Wait a minute Soji, we have something else to tell you."
" What?"

It seems their adventure will be more difficult than they thought....
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akhirnya chp4!! sori kalo jelek, lg mampet ide soalnya.
@ alex: thx ya!

kl gak suka biar ku edit lagi
ternyata bikin chp.1 bwt bahasa indonya susah juga ya, kata2nya harus ada yg beda soalnyaXD

b. inggrisnya tuh hebat bgt sih! kalau saya sih.. cuma bisa baca doang, tp kagak bisa bikin pake b. inggris gitu. grammar saya hancuur! eh, maaf, oot.

dan.. minato! kamu keren bgt sih?

"Than, it's my purpose of life, to prevent the humanity from destruction, by sealing Nyx,"

wowow. di sini minato kedengeran kereeeen sekali!

thx ya lalalalala - san.
Ini sebenernya msh perlu byk yg diperbaikin si... td aj aku baru sadar kl nulis thennya itu mustinya pake e, bukan a. Kl kamu gak nulis lg aku gak bakal tau.
THX again...

dicoba aj gpp, lama2 jg bisa kok, aku jg masih butuh byk latian. XD

Bagus... Serius... Kepengen banged buat fic pake B. Inggris... Vocab ku mah ancur...

dicoba aj livina - san! pasti bisa kok! Pracice make perfect! aku juga maasih latian kok, kl dibandingin am yg difanfic.net pnyku msh jelek rasanya...

Sebenernya aku ada fic satu pake bahasa Inggris, tapi... Jelek aja rasanya...

Gila!!!! Keren bgt sih, Ffic ku kalah nih Tio-san. Keren abizzz....!!!

Aku mengaku kalah

thx ya Arisato-chan, fanficmu jg bagus kok! ku masih menunggu lanjutannya!!